From Seth-- The story carries so much force and intensity! Well-done. It's compelling and you've managed to really connect the viewer to the predicament. My two main suggestions-- eliminate the white and render one thing a bit more in each page. For example, the page with the woman drinking liquor, maybe her face remains flat but possibly the wall behind her becomes the most detailed part of the page. Or maybe the bottle? I think rendering one thing more than the rest adds to the curiosity the viewer might feel and deepens the psychological undercurrent. I'm eager to see your next two posts!
Amanda- This looks really good! I wish I was as good as a drawer like you. I love the detail and it really shows that you put time into this project.
ReplyDeleteFrom Seth-- The story carries so much force and intensity! Well-done. It's compelling and you've managed to really connect the viewer to the predicament. My two main suggestions-- eliminate the white and render one thing a bit more in each page. For example, the page with the woman drinking liquor, maybe her face remains flat but possibly the wall behind her becomes the most detailed part of the page. Or maybe the bottle? I think rendering one thing more than the rest adds to the curiosity the viewer might feel and deepens the psychological undercurrent. I'm eager to see your next two posts!
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