https://youtu.be/8IzicOOcqUY
Theres the link for my video. I did two days of filming since my last upload and I edit most of it. For the next submission I will edit more of the last part of the video and like put different clips of videos at different places.
Theres the link for my video. I did two days of filming since my last upload and I edit most of it. For the next submission I will edit more of the last part of the video and like put different clips of videos at different places.
From Seth-- I really like where this is going. Did you happen to read my comments from your last post? My earlier suggestions still hold true for the most of the early sequences. That said, I feel like the conceptual focus is starting to solidify with your ending sequences about communing with nature. The grandeur and joy of being immersed in nature (spinning sequence). Is this correct? If that's the case, I think should adjust the amount of content before that sequence to let the viewer really feel the crescendo. You could also really embellish and extend the ending sequence. That said, I think the outdoor footage could benefit form more spacial shifts (zooming in and zooming out) especially when you are in the frame in third-person view. You are often in the middleground and I think more footage with zooming in and zooming out could emphasize that nice rhythmic affect that you are using.
ReplyDeleteOne other suggestion, have you considered selected areas of color and/or value adjustments? I think you said you're using Imovie? One thing you could try, even just as an experiment, would be to take some footage, say the make-up scene or some of the nature footage, for example, and drag just that footage into Photoshop. Turn your workstation into the "Motion" setting on the upper right drop-down menu. Then play around with Image-- Adjustments-- Saturation or Hue or Value or Contrast, etc. Just a thought. You can also do this in Adobe Premiere, which is also free right now until May 31st. Let me know through email if you need help or tutorials.
Excellent work!
From Carli-- So cool! I like how much time you took to make this. All the angles and the editing! I like where this going as well. Will we see anything take place in the evening?
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